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#1

Rate my logo and make sure to give feedbacks

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#2

In my opinion it looks generic and doesn’t look like anime if left alone. What game are you making it for?

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#3

It was a commision he said he just want text and doesnt want me to give vectors and stuff and i made it to him

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#4

Well if that’s what the commissioner wants.

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#5

what do you think i should and rate my logo

#6

I think the logo should fit the game’s style but that depends on the game. I don’t think i’ll be able to rate it by numbers since it doesn’t reflect my intentions. This logo is readable but doesn’t really give of an anime style but that’s probably the game’s job.

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#7

Looks pretty simple, I’m by no means a graphic designer or anything but it could use something to make it stand out more

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#8

doesn’t look great, if you replaced the text with ANYTHING it would mean same thing. i can see ‘poop roleplay’ ‘dog roleplay’ ‘pig roleplay’ ‘meow roleplay’ all on there, and looking the same. not very unique, need more anime related stuff, and yea i guess

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#9

Man out of blue someone dmed me asking for logo and he said no vectors,no bg and this is the name Anime Roleplay and i asked him dont you think the name is kinda bad but he said do your job so i did

#10

@FastJohn443 @DarkkDoge can you say me how can i improve

#11

i didn’t say the name was bad, just that the logo was generic and undetailed

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#12

Rather simplistic and missing any originality, especially with two conflicting colours, but if it suits whoever you’re creating it for/your needs, then I don’t see a problem with it

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#13

say me how do i improve so i can do what u say

#14

to improve add more anime related stuff like even in 2d would be fine

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#15

show me a demonstration of what you saying

#16

what do you mean? i’m just saying to add more anime-related stuff, how do you not get that?

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#17

I don’t see anything anime about this.

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#18

like where should i add can you say and what to add

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#19

literally all around the logo, have a pattern in the background, just anime related stuff though from different animes

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#20

For me its the shading style you used. It looks like you used some sort of airbrush tool (if you did not please correct me!). Now the airbrush tool is not bad, but since your using black it gives it a more murky and clouded look. (I suggest instead on the “Anime” to try and shade with a dark blue instead of black, and for the “Roleplay” use a dark red)

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