Hello! I just made my first skyscraper advertisement, let me know what you think.
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I think it would be better if the zombie was upside down. Otherwise it is very good 
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The zombie is upside down? Lol. I know what you meant though, thanks for the feedback.
The advertisement itself doesn’t show the idea, or the whole picture. It’s simply a “Zombie, Human” with a few images.
I recommend making sure the advertisement actually tells someone what the ad is for, otherwise it’s just an image saying Human and Zombie.
For the image itself, it does not look very “good”. It is very simplistic and basic. Basic is good, but too basic is not.
I think in my opinion that the advertisement will not get many clicks.
The advertisement looks very dull.
First off, the renders of the characters look sort of rushed, and there is not very good lighting on them.
Why is there a weird red spot? Is it supposed to represent anything between zombies and humans?
Why is the zombie upside down?
What is the ad supposed to show, other than a zombie and a human? There is no clear message to entice someone to click on the ad.
Overall, the ad could use some heavy adjustments