Good day, recently I have started working on a small apocalyptic/zombie game type town project and would like to receive constructive criticism on how to improve this.
I would appreciate any help on lighting, pricing if I were to sell it (robux) and other general improvements
The map itself is really put together beautifully, the lighting on the other hand is a bit too intense with the yellow. I would recommend a blue more over and a whitish fog as well.
It’s really beautiful and designed nicely, the lighting is too intense and feels out of place.
Nice work altogether, keep it up!
Amazing! Everything blends super nicely together. Good job.
Replying as you had edited the lighting, it looks really good and about perfect. I’d just recommend to keep adjusting it as I feel it can be improved a little bit more, none the less a huge improvement.
Really nice lighting, could improve on the general ambient. Solid 8/10.
not going to lie, I think it looks great? Are you gonna use this as one of your game designs? I hope you do because it would be actually fun and scary to play in that as a horror game.
Amazing attention to detail. Looks very realistic and would turn out great when used in a game! Keep on building my friend!
I’d probably pay 2000 R$ - 3000 R$ for the map.
When I first look at it I thought, that doesn’t look like it was made in roblox studio it looks very realistic for a roblox game, the lighting is perfect, perfect detailing. Solid, 10/10.
A map as genuine as a GTA game. If I had to give it a score, it would have been 1000/10. It was great thanks for letting me admire it. This is my personal opinion.
I know most of the other comments say this, but the building is top notch. 
No need to change on that. The lighting however looks a bit too intense and directional, as if it’s coming from a flashlight. Try raising the ambient light to give parts in less lights more detail and also make the color of the sun a more natural white/slight orange.
Edit: in the alternate lighting picture the lighting looks better, just everything is way too dark. That could really use the ambient light.
