I´ve made some armor sets using Roblox Studio, and I decided to recreate them in Blender to make them look nicer.
What can I improve?
Which one look nicer?
Do you like them?
Armor Set (Roblox Studio)
Incomplete Armor Set (Blender)
i think it pretty good but why there why there was no protection for your stomache then just chest and shoulder maybe you cover the stomach as well and the look of it pretty cool and the unique of it was the look of it so… keep it up and show more to the community always see you next time.
Seeya!
Gotta be honest, those shoulder pads looks too “stiff”. It’s more like putting a plank on your shoulders rather than an actual shoulder protection. I suggest you either make it drape to the shoulders (curve like a bowl) or shorten the length. Following @RISING_ROBLOX’s suggestion, yes you should make the armour cover the back AND the stomach (or it’ll be a clean lunge to the stomach or back from the enemy). The overall shape is already good, keep it up
Thanks for your feedback, I´ll follow your tips!
I like it but I recommend something that covers more, you can keep your style but add armor to the stomach and a bit long on the arms.
Like this (With your design)
They are just examples of how you could cover your stomach and arms.
Id suggest to cover more the stomach and the back
Really good armor set! Looks like a armor set from a tycoon. Keep up with the amazing work! 
It looks good, but if you are planning to make this fit onto multiple types of characters, you might have difficulty doing so since everyone has a unique package that might not neccesarily match yours
Stomach has no protection and its vital to have some there. Make the shoulder pads a tad bit smaller as they look to large.
