Hello! I am asunoandkrito and I’ve been building this armor shop for my game. It looks fine to me, but I wanted to hear the opinions of others. I’m not done yet.
The crates, barrels, windows, and that board near the entrance are free models.
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At a quick glance, the first thing that sticks out to me is how the sign isn’t centered with the building or windows.
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I kinda forgot about the other part of the building when I was putting the sign on. I built the sign first.
The sign text looks out of place, to my opinion. Try changing it up to look more unique, or maybe replace it with a big armor symbol.
I think you should improve the lighting (turning off legacy outlines would be a great start). You should also add a little more detail (maybe delete the surrounding area and add a grass island or something around it with rocks and trees etc). I also think you should redo the layout of the house, because as of right now it’s just a solid block.
Everything looks nice in my opinion, but the sign doesn’t match with the style of the building. Maybe have some sort of items on it or something else to resemble the sign, but anyway, it’s nice!
The background is part of the town area. And that spot isn’t where the shop’s final location is going to be. Thanks for the feedback though.
The only things I would change is the fact that the left window isn’t centered between the pillars, the sign is off-centered and the text doesn’t quite fit, and I don’t know if the door is on another side or if there is one, which is a tad bit odd because I suggest the door to be on the side with the sign unless it is an overthecounter stand. Otherwise great job.