Feedback on auditorium

Quite recently, I have started experimenting with building. I believe I have been building for around 1-2 months now, and am still pushing my capabilities.

So, I just wanted to get some feedback on this auditorium I have recently made for a group.

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Any feedback is appreciated, thanks.

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Looks great so far, I love the inside of the building! I do have a few suggestions that might be useful for you.

  • Consider changing up the lighting so it isn’t as plain. Some examples could be adding a ColorCorrection or Bloom effect.
  • The grass makes it look odd. It’s too light and I think a darker, more realistic green would look better with the auditorium building.
  • Perhaps change up the exterior. I don’t think having that stone brick being the whole map is a good idea, since it’s rather plain and looks boring. Maybe try switching it to an island. Also, try adding bushes or trees somewhere. If you do end an making it an island, maybe add some beaches around with some other decor.
  • Add some reflectance on the glass and use the glass material (if you aren’t already) because the glass looks foggy and clear, making it look like there isn’t any glass from afar. I think it could be more translucent.
  • Change up the floor inside the auditorium. The white shiny floor blends in with those couches and I think it should be a wooden floor like the previous room.
  • Why couches? Why not individual seats?
  • The podium looks incredibly small compared to the size of the auditorium.
  • Add some designs to the walls? Use material/textures since it looks kinda plain, unless your game is going for a smooth plastic look.
  • The colors look very grim. The walls are very plain and they’re too dark, the text doesn’t stand out, the dolphin is too dark as well. I would suggest adding a few surfacelights on stuff like the text so it stands out more and isn’t too dark.
  • Change up the terrain settings for the water. (I don’t know if that’s your studio graphics turned to low or if the water looks like that in-game) I would try to make it more transparent and to make it a lighter shade of blue.
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For 2 months this is impressive. You need variation in color and whatnot though. The auditorium seems pretty small, and auditoriums don’t look like this. The seats are weird to be onstage like that and there’s no backstage. The seats on stage make it look like an episode of that wendy williams show. The reflecting floor is really odd. You should make it look like an actual auditorium as it doesn’t look like one right now. Rug, carpet etc. The couches are unusual. Imagine walking into an auditorium and sitting on a couch with a stranger lol… Let me also bring up the elephant of the room, the glass. It’s literally a glass house in which anyone could just look in and watch for free,not to mention auditoriums usually have little to no windows because of the lighting. The auditorium could use more detail, lights on the roof, design on the roof etc. the dolphins also seem overused as you’ve used it 4 times. I would personally be rid of most or all the windows, make it wooden, more like an actual auditorium etc… hopefully this helped

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Wow, not bad! It’s astonishing how you’ve only been devving for 1-2 months. :smiley:

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Looks amazing. Jotaro Kujo would like to know your location.