i made a new hospital for my game called baconville hospital, and i made this topic just to see what you think of it
here’s some pictures of it:
is it good? is it bad? what should be improved?
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I feel the outside needs work cuz it just looks like a big block. Try adding a roof and you could add some things to the side
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what’s wrong with it?
there’s already a roof on the building but should i make it a little bigger
For the roof I suggest making it more like 3d cuz it is just flat right now and makes it look not as good.
Also what I mean is it just look like a big block. Add like walls which are not all in one way if that makes sense so it looks better
is this what you were talking about?
i made the roof a little bigger if that’s what you were talking about
this picture was the roof from before
I suggest you add more special rooms in the “Hospital”, and I would like you to add a Pharmacy since all hospitals have them and add a cafeteria since I don’t see one and that theres supposedly one in the last room with a food tray, and lastly add an overhang in the main door, also it looks more like a clinic.
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I don’t really see any difference at all. I mean what im saying is not rocket science.
What I mean is like make the roof more alive.
As some refrence images;
is that what you were talking about
adding something like that to my hospital roof?
wait but who’s going to see that
I don’t really think you understand at all. At the moment from the outside it looks like something which could have been made in 3-4 minutes with not lots of effort.
You need to make it more alive if it makes sense. I am not gonna say anything else cuz i dunno how else to explain it.
what i’m trying to say is that what you were trying to explain to me on your other replies in this topic
i’m not sure about adding more rooms since my hospital is supposed to be like a small hospital with 5 rooms, but i could add a cafeteria, a overhang on the entrance, and maybe a pharmacy
the only problem is i don’t know where to put the pharmacy at inside the hospital
Here are my suggestions:
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The outside. You want to attract the players to you, not from the building. It just looks like a square building. Use a reference photo for the exterior/interior! Always helps a lot.
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If the PC is a FM alongside with the desk, then remove it and try making it your own on Blender (Learn the basics of it if you don’t know how to make things on it)
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The hallway is bland. Be sure to center the light too! Use texture packs for the interior/exterior as well.
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For the main door, it looks very roblox-ish style. Make it stand out! Here’s a good hospital door I found that you can use it for a reference:
(pictures will include of doors that you can build for the rooms as well)
^ ROOM DOOR
^ ENTRANCE DOOR #1
^ ENTRANCE DOOR #2
- Also, you can search other doors if you don’t like the ones I found on Google.
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could i use that red line just like the one you probably saw in the interior of the baconville hospital or should it have a bit more to it
if you have any ideas, you can reply back
the pc and desk inside the hospital were the ones that i made myself
also i don’t know blender since i’m just a builder and not a modeler
what’s wrong with the hallway inside the hospital