Feedback on blender animation for my aunt =)


i made this animation for my aunts buissness as to help her and she havent responded YET soo can you guys please tell me some feedback on it or ideas for blender models / animations thanks

Likes/motivation would be appreciated =D

also dont mind the store name ok thanks

thanks

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That kind of animation style looks like the kind of animation from a big company or a movie trailer. So I would say that animation is pretty decent, but I think you should turn up the brightness and make the letter more better.

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oh ok the animation is like for a store and this is my first animation so ya

how big is the company very interesting, and very good for first animation, try rendering with cycles, and adding an sun light.

oh yeah, is this it? https://mipjstore.com/ edit: why is everything there so much money

Totally agree, letters really need some improvement. If you could add some details or background I bet it will look way better. Good job anyways, keep going:)

I like the fact that the animation is very smooth. But I recommend you put a black background.

If you make a black background and make a red light or any color you want it will look something like this:

And don’t forget to shade smooth the letters.

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It looks really clean but it needs some form of background because I think the grey seems kinda bland

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The letters are a bit too dark in my opinion but good overall.

I suggest that you are making it 2D way, 3D way may confuses people of what business your aunt have, is it 3D commission company? Or a coffee business? That what’s probably in people’s mind.

they sell not joking, clothes shoes etc

The lighting should be more even, it doesn’t look that great with the really harsh light only in one spot

currency difference .

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