Feedback on boss cutscene animation?

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#1

Hi All!

Was kind of bored, so I decided to make some fun real-time cutscenes using ROBLOX Studio, inspired by Gh0stRunner Cutscene Demo.

This is my first ever attempt at cinematic animations/short teasers, it’d be helpful if I could get some feedbacks (and criticism?) :grin:

I’m looking forward to make more of these!

(technically 90% ROBLOX Studio, I edited in the text & logo stuff in post-production, but still pretty doable to just have the texts as a GUI inside ROBLOX.)

(voice & music belongs to Riot Games for League of Legends, they are not mine.)

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#2

Wow, awesome work! Try to mess with keyframe directions and styles a bit. But totally I love your work, keep it up and goodluck!

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#3

I don’t know anything about animations, so I can’t give any criticism, but as far as I can tell this looks well-made. Good job!

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#4

Thank you!

Specifically, keyframes for what? The movement, the camera, or…?

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#5

Awesome , especially for your first cinematic animation . I love the style but do you mind if I ask for what game did you make this?

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#6

For dark person’s movement would be good

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#7

Thank you so much!

I made it for Weaponcraft, an upcoming vast open-world fantasy MMORPG!

You can check out our progress in our social medias:
https://twitter.com/weaponcraft_

discord: /weaponcraft

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#8

This is really good! Is that a trailer for the game?

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