Feedback on British Military Thumbnail

Hey there! My name’s, XareezX and I am a GFX artist. I’ve had 1 - 2 years of experience with GFX designing, and today I just wanted to showcase my GFX!

I was aiming for this type of look:

Gfx_referance

If you have any tips/suggestions please leave them in the comments, as it would help me more in my GFX designing!

That’s all from me, I hope you have a nice day/night! :smiley:

Software: Blender
Photo Editor: Photopea

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Not bad but I feel like the bloom is TOO MUCH!!!

I also see that the chopper seems to be floating mid air rather than flying. There is no motion in the wings. It’s also a CHOPPER (or whatever it is, I am not a helicopter specialist), it’s suppose to spread the dirt MORE.

The title is also quite… bad. Maybe make it more minimalist.

And as, this is a GFX. I suggest adding more detail to the shrubs you added.

The commandos in the image can also be made a bit better, as in, their equipment doesn’t match their clothing. As a side bonus, give em gloves and masks. It’s a desert, you can easily get some lung disease with all the sand and such. (Somehow lol)

Other than that, everything is good.

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Nice stuff!

The first thumbnails has better overall texture and color. Thumbnail #2 is blasted out and all the color/detail is lost.

If the idea is that these soldiers just got dropped off (inferred from their formation and the chopper in the back), then I don’t know why there are hummers in thumbnail #1.

Maybe surround them with destruction, as if they just entered a hot zone.

Maybe move the chopper to the left and tilt the top of it away from them (like it is leaving in a hurry).

Maybe move the center guy back in the center of everyone and have all the other soldiers on one knee.

There is a lot of empty space in the sky and on the ground. Put in broken buildings and debris.

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