Hello!
Recently I finished my first Low-Poly build called “The Voidlands”
heres the build :
https://www.roblox.com/games/7199259105/coolguyluo1s-Place-Number-67?#!/game-instances
any reccomendions?
I like the concept! As for recommendations, I have a few.
Firstly, it is a bit strange that the trees have no collision boxes. Also in a similar vein, the leaves of the trees glowing is a good idea! I like what you were going for, but making them neon is just too bright. It’s difficult to look at them and I think you should consider other methods of making the leaves glow.
The cabin is a little strange. It’s small, all made of the same material and color, and has gaps in the walls and ceiling. I also got stuck inside. The doorway is too small to get out of. I suggest diversifying materials to help make the cabin look more interesting, and making it a fair bit larger.
I think the two portals look good, but you should go around the back and sides of the portal and clean up any stray geometry. Weird corners and edges take away from the build.
Also it looks like you attempted to give the edges of the map a nice curvy shape, which is great, but there are holes all near the edges that you should probably fill. I can also see some stray planes and edges down below the floor of the map that should probably be taken care of.
Great job for your first build!
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Awesome, I can tell you took your time on this.