I don’t know if I’m supposed to put the images or text first, but I put the image first, so that’s that… However, I’m looking for feedback on my Eclipse tower, most people familiar with the Grand Theft Auto V franchise will understand, but I have also linked pictures of what it looks like for you good builders that haven’t, anyways is there any feedback or advise to improve the looks of this building? For the entrance I was going for the Xbox 360/ps3 entrance, so my game can be more compatible with lower quality computers, no offense.
This is something incredibly simple. There are some concerns:
Each floor is too simple; details such as window frames should do the work
Some details are very dense yet simple; make sure to spread the details even(can you see the high part count?)
Yellow dominates thes colors, again
Conclusion
It is very difficult to find any excellence. The only detail I find interesting is the walls along the bottom floor. In my opinion, this is too simple.
Variation and details should be the target of this build. Maybe working on the rooftop will do?
Looks quite good here is. Some things to improve it!
My Suggestions
1.The buildings looks really good i would. Suggest you add windows in each of the frames they look a little simple and the piece, at the bottom of the tower you should spread that out more like seen on the Reference pictures…
2.For the bushes below you should add some, brighter colors to them i would suggest you fix that. Plus on the Eclipse tower i would add that brick line! going down the building on the side of it.
Just as the previous two have mentioned, adding details to the windows would increase the detail, as this just seems like it could be made with a single huge part and then a bunch of window-sill parts, also having a large building towering above you just pitch black would, personally, discourage me, somewhat, as a player.
I think your overhangs on the window sills should be increased somewhat to make it more noticeable, as well as that as seen in your image below, when you look towards the bottom of the building, the window sills colours get somewhat darker depending on the angle and distance of the camera, which the size of the part (should?) affect - I believe making it larger would lessen this, though I could be mistaken.
Your image
Adding details to the roof, as the image below shows(I don’t play GTA V so I don’t know if this is accurate). Your roof seems a bit bland.
