Hi, just would like a bit of feedback on some of my recent builds.
Thanks!
Fall Forest
Simple Kitchen
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The Fall Forest looks very nice and really like the style. My suggestion for it is that there should possible be some more varying height in the trees, and I would recommend adding some lower branches. Other than that it looks great and would love to see an even larger scale forest like this!
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The forest has a great sense of verticality with the tall tree trunks accompanied by a pleasing blocky style of building. The dead trees are a little barren with a couple branches awkwardly sticking out with no variety in size and length.
The kitchen scene you’ve made is great and reminds me of a stylized cartoony mobile game! My only gripes are some of those barren walls. Consider things to spice them up! Clocks, Calendars, more cupboards, etc. On the topic of cupboards, lower them a bit! Telling by the size of the fridge you’re going for something that would make sense in terms of a rather small character (though you could consider making it a bit taller) they need to be able to reach up there in a way that would make sense!
All in all you have a great consistent style of building going on here, super excited to see what you make in the future. Keep it up!
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Thanks! ill keep some of these ideas in mind - and i’ve already started adding some stuff to the walls of the kitchen, looks way better now.
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Like most other people said, you need some variety in size for the trees in the forest. Other than that, it’s great. And for the kitchen, I think that refrigerator is really short, and it’s color doesn’t blend with the rest of the kitchen. The stove backing a little tall, too.
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For the trees, I say make them more nature. More curves and less straight lines. For the house, I say not to use decals for the brick effect. If you build the bricks out, the outcome is much nicer than a decal.
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My suggestions:
Fall Forest:
Very good, I would just add more leaves in the grass.
Simple Kitchen:
Perfect, I’ve got nothing to say.
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For a naturally grown forest, I say it looks way to artificial.
I suggest having branches sprout out in all directions. Instead of a tiny amount of leaves and unconceivable branches at the top. Maybe have the branches hang over the path itself (the path looks really nice) for a better effect.
Have the trunk steadily increase in width as it draws near the bottom.
I am sorry but it is much too blocky. Maybe have a steady incline and decline so it does to stick out like a sore thumb. This is in incredibly good start; it just needs a new tweaks.
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The fridge in the kitchen seems very low, my suggestion is scaling it up! 
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The forest background build design looks fascinating it kinda reminds me of a building style from one of the developers in charge of route building from Tbradm & Lando64000’s Development Team.
(Good designs!)
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Really love how you made the forest. The style you used reminds me a lot of a Tim Burton movie. The colors work really well together and the minor details (leaves on the ground, roots of the trees) also help complete the build. Nicely done.
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Oh wow! These are beautiful, very artsy.
Like other people said for the trees, I see that they’re very blocky in a way. I would maybe add bigger cubes to them and try rotating some.
I love the styles though, very cute! 
The fall forest scene has a great style to it with the tall tree trunks and the different kind of variety placed on the ground. Including the falling leaves i can say the blocky style, you have here is very nice but i would try adding some more leaves on the ground! So it could match the (Real Life) fall variety and if your trying to go for a realistic feel i feel like you. Should add some more leaves on the ground featuring different kind of colors added! To it such as red, orange, purple, yellow, ect. Those are some of the vegetation you would try including. All over the ground because most fall forest and around houses you would see a bunch, of leafs on the ground to match the kind of
,style your going for and it would leaf color as a phenomenon that effects. The normal green leafs of many deciduous trees in the autumn season, various of different shades of red, yellow, blue, orange, and many more those are just a couple of things you could try including. All through the ground so it could look like a fall season has, come and i would add some branches added, on the trees featuring the different kind of colors on the ground! And on the leafs itself so it could look a lot more better and improved and it would match that style, your currently going for overall i really like this creation here i would just add some leafs. On the ground with other variety added!!
And the kitchen scene you have made here, looks like a old (Roblox game) however i don’t think it looks like the old games that were seen very long ago. But it seems it matches that style your currently making however what i like to do in kitchens is! Add a bunch of details all on the walls and on different parts on the kitchen itself. So i would try including some pictures, iron shelf, microwave wall cabinet, clocks, spoons, knifes, ceramic crock, ect. Those are some of the details you could try including inside your scene then. You cold maybe add some napkins, placemats, table plant, and others but those are some you could try making so it could, look a bit more better and improved and then you could possible add! Some wall decorations so the kitchen could feature, the following details it’s suppose to have inside it.
Anyways all of your creation you have currently made looks really good. I would just include the following details so it could look more better and, then you could finish the whole scene up when the other details gets added overall i think your creation looks! Really good can’t wait to see what else you plan on making very soon, overall great job on your current creations.
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All of them look great,keep it up
I really rate the forest design considering you aimed for the smallest details [the path,leaves,mixed shades on the trees) - keep it up 
Two nice builds, both include a wide range of colours, and are not plain! I assume this did not take you long, and for simple this is good work, defiantly make more builds like this and show them off to future endeavours or potential partnerships.
I love both of these if it was for sale and I had more robux I definetly would buy it. Love it.
Fall forest is nice! The colors go well together, and it has a pleasant blocky aesthetic. My only criticism is that there should be more leaves considering it’s fall. The biggest issue though is that there is a lack of variety for tree height. Apart from that, it’s an excellent build.
The kitchen also looks nice! However, the walls look extremely bland and undetailed… it’s just a blue sea of emptiness. However, you can definitely spice it up with some paintings and such.
I give your builds a solid 9/10 :).