Greetings everyone. I am gonna introduce you my upcoming restaurant Byrón, which I would like to have some feedback on, before I release it to the public.
It’s a island type of restaurant, with many unique things such as a road coming through, high decoration detail etc. It’s built by me and my friend IxSynix.
This is really amazing, I love how detailed and realistic it is. All I would do to this would be to raise the tunnel in the third picture. It looks kind of caved in, but overall this is great, great job!
It looks great. I love the colours you’ve used they go well with one another. I like the amount of detail and the architectural work you have done is superb.
I do have one suggestion however, the lights you have made for the ceiling feel overused. It feels rather busy. I would consider removing some of the ceiling lights or even changing them up to add variation to the build.
This is absolutely a builder’s best creation. I love everything! I love how you designed it very well, the atmosphere, furnitures modelling and more. Words can’t express how shocked I am.
This is the perfect build for the modern day Roblox industry games. The use of textures appropriately and the custom register/order system really makes it feel at home. However, I feel that there can be a few improvements.
In this image, it looks like the water doesn’t really blend with the island. It may just look like this from afar, however if not it should be fixed/leveled out.
I know you have already stated that the GUI positions itself in the actual game, however I feel like there should be a custom menu which has the ability to mute/skip music, the credits, a shop, or whatever you feel like.
The beach could have some beach chairs or outside seating to make it feel like a beach. Right now, it just looks like a few boats sitting on some sand.
Quick question, do the TVs in image 6 display anything? If not, you could totally make it display the person’s current order/status of it. Judging you have a system like SB, it could show if the order has been claimed/being cooked or if the person has no current orders.
I won’t restate the comments about lighting stated by @Cosmosify above, however in image 6 (with the TVs), it does not looks as lit as the photo of the kitchen or ordering areas.
Other than that, it looks amazing! Good luck to your group.
Thanks for all that feedback, I really appriciate it! And the shop guis will be added once I get all my food done, and I am gonna use ROBLOXs video future to display moving stuff on the tv’s for the customers. And I will be sure to do everything you said, and thank you so much!