Hello all. I’m looking for some feedback on my cafe, please ignore the roof – if you have suggestions for it please let me know because I’m honestly stuck about it. This cafe has some issues that I don’t really want to change and I’ve hit the wall where you don’t feel like building anymore. Decor/furniture is not an issue, I plan to add some in the future & vegetation is not an issue either. Please tell me what you think about the cafe itself, and the worth (I’m thinking like 1k?) I know the cafe is quite big. Any suggestions are very very much appreciated. Everything is made by me. Thanks link; cafe - Roblox
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The build so far is looking really good! The window area in the front is a great place to put some window side seating. In the corners and in front of the window, you can put some plants to improve the look and feel. You can even add some seating tables outside to improve the first impression look of the cafe. This is just a future suggestion you could take.
Last but not least important is the layout which I believe could do with some changes. If you would like a one floor connected to the building, you could build a two/story floor like a upstairs area. Also, for players to walk around I would say the build is too large and the rectangular layout is very simplistic and basic but I do not think it will work for a cafe since generally speaking, you will need to find ways on what to put in the large area You could either remove the second building entirely and have just have the one rectangular layout.
Maybe even try drawing or looking online on what kind of layout you want there could be a small area in the second building with chairs, tables, couches, fireplace, a little pond, statue, etc. Just take into consideration what you want in the cafe, and giving a layout that adds both more variety of shapes and the resemblance of a cafe.
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Thanks for your feedback I’ll take it into account
I love the idea of having the windows on the roof, it is a nice touch that I might add on my future builds. One thing that really caught my eye is how tall the black roof is, I suggest making it shorter so it doesn’t take away from the whole build in general. In addition to this I saw that you are mainly just using ROBLOX materials, I suggest that you start using decals for certain textures of floors, walls, and so much more. Overall I really love the build and remember to keep it up!
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