Feedback on Cafe | "Part 2"

I took a the models from the first post I made and put them with some new models I made, and I also recolored them :smiley:

Please give me some feedback on this involving design, amount of detail, any suggestions, etc. Im still quite new to this developing thing :smile:

Also, if you’d like, I’d like a rating on my development skills; It would be much appreciated and would give me some structural feedback on how I am as a builder!

Thank you!

All Photos

Front View:

Stair View:

Corner View:

Booth View:

Outside Seating View:

Cafe View :

(^^^I emptied the inside seating due to the recoloring, I’ll put it back later hehe^^^)

Elevated View:

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Wow, very good build :classical_building:.

I don’t know if you are planning to include this later, but try adding more color to the environment. Right now it is very gray. On top of colorizing the parts themselves, you can add greenery and some nature within the build (and maybe around too). What I mean by “nature” is trees, bushes, a fountain maybe, mist. To heighten the scenery (literally), you can set the cafe on like a mountain. (A montaneous cafe! ooh).


Hopefully this shows what I’m referring to. Without the greenery and nature, the stone structure here would appear very bland. So, please consider adding this.

I apologize if I got a little deep there, a little too detailed. But hopefully you get what I’m trying to say.
The overall build looks very nice, though.

As for the rating, (10 being absolutely perfect build), I’d rate your build at an 8.
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Thank you so much! Exactly what I was needing, with the suggestions and the rating!

I was planning to add a fountain, but the greenery is a good idea too :smiley:
Also, mountains seem a bit tedious, due to my complete lack of terrain-making skills (lol) but I can try my best with the terrain editing tool hehe

It wasn’t too detailed, it was exactly what i needed, it helps me a lot!

I’d rate your response a 11/10 hehehehehhehe

And oml, I wasnt expecting an 8, thought it’d be like 4-6 lollll

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