Feedback on cartoony volcano

Today for my daily creation I made a cartoony low poly volcano. Does it fit the low poly cartoon style, or is there a way I can improve my creation?
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The volcano’s low-poly style looks great and fitting. But I would suggest lowering down the volcano’s height, squish it a bit to make it look more natural.

You can improve the volcano by:

  • Making more details such as the hole for the opening, curves and crooks on the opening and lower part.
  • Cutting down height and make it less steep.
  • Adding appropriate color.

These are just recommendations, nonetheless, your build looks great! Keep it up.

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