Feedback on Cartoony Watch Tower

Hi, I made this Cartoony Watch Tower and was wondering what you think i should Change of it?

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Looks nice, i’m not a big fan of the colours though. Maybe change the roof to red? I’d also add more details but else it looks decent i guess.

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I suggest adding a door to it and if you can enter than add a spiral stair case. Other than that the color is not that good. I suggest making the roof top red as @Not_Recognized said and also making the tower a bit darker. other than that, pretty good! :slight_smile:

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Hi I think it looks great but you should add details and make it bigger

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I would definitely work on your scaling, and adding more depth and height into your build for a basic start! The brick placements are good, but I’m finding them placed all over the build to look a little odd they almost meet the size of the windows width consider scaling them less than half the size of your windows and they seem to change throughout the build.

Even use tiles if ever needed. Nothing sticks out I would try making it a bit taller have it implement different shades of colors.

Also, you should possibly work on your colour scheme, I’m not liking just one color added to the entire tower with brownish grids. Maybe try finding a new color for the roof so it kind has a more attractive look.

Even use reference images just to use as a guide when finding the colors and placements where everything will go I find it quite interesting to use ever since I started doing it.

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Pretty good, I would add some shingles or something to the roof though

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Hey can you show me a pic of Shingles because if i search up Shingles a like Skin Infection Appears

sure, these are shingles (sorry if the skin infection pictures were gross aa)

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Better?

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This tower has a lot of potential, firstly I would change the neon to a transparency level where it’s not so bright. The stones on the side of the architecture is a bit off and odd, I would mess around with the blocks and stones on the side and put them in other places rather than all bunched up.

You obviously have a taste for this and I believe you can succeed in low poly build, keep up the fantastic work and keep posting here so we can continue to give you your suggestions and tips!

Happy Building!
stickza

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The tower top needs something. Maybe, a spiral going from the peak to the base, or maybe a change of texture/color. Besides that, it looks good!

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