Feedback on Changes to my First Model?

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#1

In 2020, I created my first model and it was a mini cartoon-styled home! :house:

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Considering that this model I created has two dislikes, I am certain that I could of done a better job. :joy: After looking at feedback during that time, I took most of them into consideration.

I procrastinated on this for a year, but I decided to make changes. I carefully reviewed this from every angle making sure it looks how I want it! As of now, it looks like this.
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Please leave me your feedback and thoughts! Once again, this is my first model but now edited. :+1: Thank you for reading!

Topic Edit - Additional Information
When I look at my screenshots over and over, it looks like nothing much has changed other than color. For that reason, here’s what I made changes to! :slight_smile:

  • Remade the door knob.
  • Fixed roof and wall height :heavy_plus_sign: added a chimney on the roof.
  • Of course, color changes to several parts to make it look cozy :relaxed:.
  • lowered floating parts :arrow_down: and fixed possible collisions that go inside each other.
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#2

Hey! This is pretty nice for your first model! You can do better then me at building at least lol. Keep it up!

  • J_osq
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#4

Thank you for the nice comment! I bet you make some awesome creations as well. :+1:

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#5

It’s okay, Change the roof, Remove the grass, and fix the door.

Rating 4/10

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#6

Thank you for the feedback! May I have your reasons?

#7

it reminds me of the “bigger on the inside” illusions.

#8

I like this, it’s simplistic and and I like the style you went for. I also like how you made it so there is light in some windows and not light in others. All I suggest really is to make the door not stick out of the building, it would look better if it weren’t. You did a nice job for your first model.

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