Hey developers, hows it going? Im ok. Ive made a city, a bit like jailbreak, and i would love some feedback on my work. I hope you enjoy.
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Looks really good! It really does resemble jailbreak a ton! 
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I like your map is good keep it up
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I will say that it looks pretty great. One problem that I have are the turns. The roads don’t curve, but instead make a straight 90 degree angle. This might have been intentional, but I don’t know.
The intersections should also have stop lights, but it is your choice.
Overall I would say it looks alright. Needs some improvements but your on your way to creating a functional city.
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Looks great! Sleek but simple. Make the roads a bit curved though. Other than that, I like it!
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Looks pretty epic, maybe add traffic lights?
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Wait … is that a jailbreak from the future? Nice job!
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It dose look like madcity and jailbreak. If you add more detail and better lighting then it would look complete. Looks nice though.
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Very nice! The text on the bank looks a bit off. Maybe remove it, or edit it. Other then that, amazing job on this build.
Happy building,
DevTigerr
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I think it’s pretty good, though if you want to make it more like Jailbreak, add lighting effects and the neon texture to make the buildings light up, like in Jailbreak.
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The city looks good, the map can be used both for RP or as for playing a criminal and police
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I really like it! I feel like it’s a bit empty though. I suggest that you add more trees to make it less empty. But other than that I really like it 
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I like it!
Although I will say that there aren’t many colors to the city, nor much of any greenery inside of the city. I’d add some brighter buildings, lights, helipad, etc. Also definitely a park.
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Looks nice, would be better if you changed the lighting effects to a shadowmap (assuming this is in-game.) Windows would make the place look better and a day and night cycle would really make it look nice.
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The city is quite plain, I advise you into adding more important details you could experiment with adding smaller objects to improve the quality of it. The bridge also lacks middle pier you could add some in the middle securing the bridge a little more. You could even take a look at some real bridges for whether gathering small ideas or to use as inspiration:
As for the city, the skyscrapers in parts of the road lack details there’s empty areas that aren’t filled with other objects. Seeing it’s more of a style as jailbreak you could try adding your own little ideas.
The city, is quite small and opened. Add city details to cover most of the empty corners and areas. There could be smaller buildings something like restaurants - stores and variety of shapes.
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It looks pretty nice, but like others said it could use some details here and there, (trees, streetlamps, etc), and maybe some shorter buildings to fill up the big empty spaces next to the towers, in my opinion that would look a bit better. Looks great so far though!
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I don’t want to say that’s bad but it looks like old roblox buildings style. You should use more materials to make it look great and some textures to make it even better!
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Nice format, I’d like to add though, maybe more diversity in terms of colours, if you look at jailbreak, they are pretty much all different colours, also, maybe make the material for some ice, like jailbreak, it’s either ice, glass, some other material that has reflectance maybe, or their really good lighting I haven’t studied it
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its really cool work! this is remembers me Jailbreak city map!
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