Feedback on City

Hello everyone, I’m currently working on an obby with a story to it. There’s a part of the game where you enter another dimension. I just recently started working on a city to serve as this new dimension. Most detail went into the street where the obby is and the incredibly tall building in the intersection.

I’d like some feedback mainly on the street, however feedback on anything is appreciated! Thank you!




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Looks absolutely amazing would go good with a game like jailbreak and maybe a driving simulator. Some stuff you could add is a hospital, prison or police office. A mail office and food places love how you even have the detail of the store. Maybe add some like condos or hotels for the street you could add some like burnt tire strips and also a double yellow line and you could add a highway since most citys have highways and also add some passing lanes. You could add a bus stop for people to go to a fire station and some fire hydrants.

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i will absolutely go more into detail. i want to make this the best experience for players. thanks so much for the feedback!

I would brighten up the colors on the buildings to keep children with lower attention spans, including changing the wi does from black to a dark grey. This was your colors wouldn’t be so contrasting and overall would keep your game from becoming outdated sooner. Hope this helps!

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thanks so much! i’m not too awesome at building but i try my way to get around it, haha. this is some awesome advice and a great strategy to keep a game alive, so thank you!

I’d maybe suggest adding more detail to the tall building, and don’t copy and paste buildings. Happy Holidays.

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Overall looks very nice! but I would say the streets could use better detailing such as turn and middle dividers. (yellow paint etc.)

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