Hey, I’m a scripter but I can also build. I built a clothing store called Dripp Central for my game, the place where you can get dripped out! Paired with my lighting, I think it looks nuts
Can I get some feedback on my build?
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Great start so far, but:
- The material of the frame doesn’t make sense. It’d be better to have it as concrete or metal, something less extreme than slate (it’s slate right?).
- There’s too much glass. As much I love natural light, I have to say that you need to add frames at the corners. Right now, it looks like everything’s floating LOL. Also, you can add walls to certain areas to give it more of a variation than completely glass. Perhaps, you can have fitting rooms there? You wouldn’t want to have a giant window where people are supposed to change, right?
- Instead of just a box, add extensions that are slightly lower/higher in height that give more depth to the shop. It’ll be better than a box and will give the store a stronger impression.
Other than that, excellent job so far!
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Got it, thanks for the feedback! I’m starting to get into building alongside scripting so Im grateful for all the help i can receive
EDIT: and yeah its slate LOL
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I don’t mean offense but the name to me is generic and a little cringey. The build itself is just a huge glasshouse. Why is there bounty and food in a clothing store? You should make different floors, make it bigger, make walls & not everything just as glass as this has no structural support and including the inside & out, something I can make in less than a day. Also, add some vegetation or something more to it. Like a top buyer leaderboard, developer stand etc… it’s quite bland and simple right now. Not something I’d 100% love
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Uh, do you think the whole game is a clothing store?
Edit: i didnt mean that in any offense btw
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You asked for feedback on a clothing store, they are usually standalone games. Not buildings based inside of a game
But yeah, I’ll take the feedback you said into account
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Nice building, I like the idea and theme. Have you consider adding variety of shapes and expand on the interior?
As for my feedback it’s decent! I’d say some of the ways to improve your build or things to add is having small objects that would really just make everything stand out. Your home store is well built but clothing stores tend to feature different shapes even larger ones if needed the flooring texture is alright I don’t think it matches with the building that is just my personal opinion.
Try adding vegetation throughout the front area to create a better atmosphere potted plants flowers something along the lines.
I don’t know if it’s from my point of view but the ceiling could be improved, maybe add air vents pipes just to add a nice touch to it. Overall the store structure lacks a few detail in the interior I would try making different shapes and sizes of clothing, equipment so it doesn’t look repetitive. It’s a good build.
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Gotcha. I really do appreciate all of this help I’m getting, thanks
Eventually, I am going to script this shop to self rotate clothes on the mannequins daily with different rarities, so the clothes on the mannequins are really just placeholders for now
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