Hi, so I have recently been practicing on making realistic like clothing for a group I am in that are for two certain teams, and I have came up with these two designs.
All suggestions/feedback are deeply appreciated!
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They are okay.
The main problems I see with them, mainly the one labeled TEST SUBJECT, is that the contrast for the text is way too low. Additionally, the clothing’s collar is very aliased, though that might just be Roblox.
You also cannot tell what the clothing is from looking at the front of it. You might want to change that.
The color for the SCP Security Agent is quite a unique choice to say the least. Maybe make it stand out more; a lighter or darker color should do the trick. I also am visually confused by the pockets, to the point where the only way to force myself into understanding them is to think of them as among us characters at a weird angle:
I might be misunderstanding the meaning of this design but it is not self-explanitory in the clothing.
On the other hand, the TEST SUBJECT design is really nice. I do like the yellow stripes on one side of the shirt. However, it would be nice to see some sort of shirt pocket or something less bland on the front. As stated earlier, both shirts lack front designs.
The pants for the TEST SUBJECT are probably the blandest pants I’ve seen in my life. Sometimes, that’s a good thing. I don’t know what you plan to turn these into, so I don’t have any suggestions for this one.
The pants for the SCP Security Agent look like armor, in a sense. Again, I don’t know the context or intensions of this product so I can’t suggest anything for it, but I would recommend clarifying what it is.
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The clothing looks good. The text and logo on the clothing aren’t as visible as they should be though, make them darker.
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Thanks for the feedback! I will try to implement these features later on when I have the time.
The SCP Agent that you are looking at is the Security Department (SD) uniform, which needs to be known because they act as the first responders for the SCP Foundation, and when the uniform is dark, you could get it confused with the Mobile Task Force (MTF).
I also did not really know what I was doing when I was doing the colormap, so that may be another reason why it might look odd.
Now for the Test Subject (TS), This uniform I had a hard time doing. I lost the file to it multiple times, and I had to imrpovise. The problem with this one is that I had a lack of creativity in this one, and I tried adding pockets but I just couldn’t seem to get them right. The pants had a similiar problem, I tried connecting the patterns or whatever with the shirt, but I just couldn’t get the right position, so I just ended up not doing it at all.
The main style I tried going for this uniform was Patient uniform from Black Site Zeta, as well as other mixes of styles from groups like CreepySin’s SCPF and other groups.
Now, if you want a better explanation, you can contact the project founder Arit#4823 for some context on what we are doing.
But the lighting can affect how they look, and if you want a picture where the clothing will be, here you go. Not really much of a different if im being honest, just the colors have changed.
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Thank you for the explanation. Now that I understand the context, the clothing does look a lot more suitable, and I can try to provide suggestions.
I was wondering if the Test Subject uniform could use some sort of shirt/arm pocket.
This makes total sense, but I believe there is a misunderstanding here. What I meant by bland was that the color of the entire pants was the same. Taking the Roblox Jeans for example, it has a texture to it.
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Thanks for the suggestions, I may or may not take them into consideration.
Now, I’m not trying to go for a ragged or whatever style, but if you look closely, you can see some texture. It is not the best, but not the worst im my opinion.
The Ribstop Fabric is hard to see, sadly same goes with the Noise. The shading in both may be a reason why you can’t see the texture I put, but oh well.
Ah, I didn’t even see that! Looks nice.
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