Heya fellows, 4 months into modeling and ive just realized its crucial to have a good visual display of my work examples. Ofcourse this is my first time doing so and my finished product was this commission-showcase sheet.
I know its not the best haha.
** some honest feedback would be highly appreciated :)! **
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*i do feel like its a little bit messy but im not sure how to improve it haha
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It looks decent but a serious development studio wouldn’t strain your eyes reading it. I suggest darkening the font so people can read it with ease.
Another thing to add is that your PayPal, or include your discord tag, as people don’t message you with only knowing the fact you have discord. The robux sign is fine, as people can understand you only accept robux as your payment type. A thing also to consider is to make everything equal sized, or set to a certain size, such as big fonts for titles, medium for sub-titles, and small text for information & such.
You could add a little bit of spacing between each example to make it not cluttered.
The information on the top right could be put on the bottom left as not that much people would notice it straight away.
You could also consider using a bigger canvas size to fit your three examples and other things such as titles, and information. It’s up to you to pick which one suits you best.
Good luck with your modelling career!
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Commission sheets are in general often way too cluttered
This doesn’t even have your Discord tag and stuff on it, honestly I think commission sheets aren’t that useful unless you’re an artist or GFX designer. You’re probably better off with a carrd portfolio
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It is very very cluttered, my eyes don’t know where to start ! I would suggest breaking each of your subjects into different boxes/sections so if someone is only interested in, say, the rigs/pets they know where to look immediately. Put the discord, twitter, social media, ect close together to stay organized - another reply couldn’t even find them ! Somehow.
I will say the colors are very gripping and your creations are very cool looking ! Make a neat color scheme and play to the colors of your examples to make them stand out more - the dark knight armor is pretty difficult to see on the black background.
If you want somewhere to start I would suggest a taller, paper-sized layout with enough room in width to fit your three examples with names above and descriptions/text below it. However layouts is more personal preference so you should use whichever suits you !
Good luck !
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The sheet itself is extremely messy and hard to read. As an employer, I would automatically deny services before even looking into the modeling work itself.
I recommend sticking with a solid color background with simple designs to add flair to it. On the left, show model examples, and to the right, show prices.
As for pricing, make sure to charge based on your time; you’re underselling yourself.
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