Feedback on Creepy Hotel Hallway!

Hello guys, I’m here again! After not building for a while, I came back and came up with this. Please give constructive criticism on how to make it better and give your honest opinion. Thanks for clicking in!

This is the front of it. Here’s the back, (pay close attention)

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I do love it, but I recommend making the doors a different color than the hallway walls.This is just so they stand out a bit more. And have you considered adding flickering lights?
There also appears to be light emitting from the corners of the hallways, which is kind of weird.
Anyways great job! ㅇㅅㅇ

Also:

This may help you.

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I planned to make the walls stay in a slightly darker shade of grey since it was in my reference images. This isn’t a game but a picture, I’ll add flickering lights in the future. Thanks for reminding me about that! I also didn’t notice the unnatural lights and how they’re positions. Thanks! I’ll improve that right now :smiley:

After clicking that link, you JUST BEAT ME AT MY OWN GAME OMGGGGG LOOOLLLL

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Woah, 16+ people were rickrolled. I actually thought that the video was about making horror games or creepy lightings. :laughing:

I really like the style! I recommend you to add something in the character like a weapon or an animation, that’d make it creepier! Other than that, it looks very nice.

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I like the horror aura this build has. It seems creepy and the rick roll totally makes everything even more scarier. I agree with @Macawmangrovve12 about adding a flickering light, that would make the horror element in this build even higher.

(Also, nice rick roll link Mac lol)

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The dark is way less scary than the hotdog… :eyes:

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wow scary, anyway back on topic. Anyway, all and all I think you did a great job with adding the scary element aspect to it, however the hotdog doesn’t really fit with the theme to be honest. Well, I hope this helped🙂 Keep up the great work🛠

Nice rick-roll :rofl:

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