Hey Im very new to this whole dev forum thing so if this page sucks thats ok, so im building this daycare for a group and im getting payed 1k Robux, What do you think?
Thanks! 
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I kinda like the place you have to build a couple of week or month so… well done but there was something you need to change and it was a… the colour of the Daycare. I m not talking about the front entranceway but I can see that you use a bright colour. so can you make a bright colour go down a little bit. the roof really good but also can put sun rays that go through the window at your roof as well. light in building a little bit too bright so… you just need to low some of the light.everything in this picture is great and I really appreciated that you have made a marvelous job on it and to achieve this it will take a while to make so… excellent, good job and well done.
that it and that all and I will see you in the next reply…
Seeya!
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What do you mean by make a bright color go down a bit, And thanks so very much for replying and thanks for the support
Hey!
The Daycare looks great, I;d suggest maybe adding more life to the exterior and possibly not using just plastic/smooth plastic. I’d also suggest making the windows in the roof more symmetrical by adjusting them to the middle and lowering its brightness. Other than that it’s pretty good.
Though it seems like I’ve played a daycare like this years ago for development ideas. Did you take any ideas from a different daycare?
like this, if I put bright color “green” in my part it makes me attractive and I want you to low the bright color down so that I can see around the place and if you still don’t know what I m talking about, I think you know what it is:
https://www.google.com/search?q=colour+picker&rlz=1C1CHBF_enMY821MY821&oq=colour+picker&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5j46j0.2834j0j8&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8
and I want you to turn down like medium so that I can see around me
Also, asking for how much you should sell an asset can be considered as spam. Please change this.
Read the post, he didn’t ask how much he should sell the build for. He just stated he was being paid 1k for it and was asking for feedback the build, not if the price was good.
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Yes I did I was from a different daycare
And yes I am getting payed 1k by a group for it
I’m not going to start an argument here. But asking for prices and if they’re good/not can be related to rule 7.1
The daycare looks ok. However, consider adding different materials such as a wooden or carpet floor. The trees outside the daycare look the same. Try reducing the amount of trees. I also suggest removing trees in front of the play area. It seems a bit obtrusive.
By looking at the screenshots you provided for us the building itself isn’t quite good the color and material you use on it is one whole color I’ll try placing some textures onto the walls to make the building more interesting.
It’s a pretty good attempt at creating a daycare building, but try adding textures to the tables to make it realistic as wood planks don’t suit the material for it. I’d also recommend using mesh for the chairs so they don’t look too blocky at the moments the ones you build are copied and pasted chairs try making other variety of ones and possibly place some textures to it.
If you’re looking to make a colorful classroom, I’d recommend making and placing some art, pictures onto the wall or add some boxes of toys, so it could look more improved by detailing it or adding some sort of decoration to make it stand out. I’ll leave an image below to get the full detail on how a daycare looks try throwing a bunch of details on the (walls ceiling) ect.
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Well, it’s not bad, but there is room for some improvement.
- I’d try playing around with some materials and use some custom textures in toolbox (not make everything plastic)
- The ceiling lights look a bit bright, and you could tone it down a bit if you like
- Edit the lighting in general
- Some structures in the building look too thick, and maybe you could “slim it down” a bit.
Nice job on the ceiling design!