Feedback on Departmental Trailer

Hey Guys, Just Need some feedback on a hiring video for an up-and-coming game. Filmed it and edited it, Spent around 40 mins filming and 50 mins editing so quite a rushed video but I think it had a good outcome.

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Considering this is my first time actually filming and coming out with an end product I’m pretty happy with it. :+1:t6:

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I like the camera zooms, but you shouldn’t call it a film because we don’t really know what’s going on.
We just see fire trucks passing between burning trees. We don’t know why you’re showing the town hall building, where the connection is?
You need characters in action.

Its meant to show how the people or fire trucks go straight into the centre of the bushfires. Also building not a town hall, The city train station representing where they are.

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I see, could you try to do a scene where the firemen send water and then put out the fire?

Yeah, We’re doing a remake based off a real one with people talking and their chars speaking. I think I have a clip somewhere

While not exact, Does have a firefighter in frame at a point.

isn’t very realistic, since you’re filming in game the animations aren’t realistic and are very jittery, the video is kinda low quality and it isn’t all that well made. not giving too much feedback on everything, and yes i know i am being very vague.