I am also an obby builder with about a year and a half of experience so here are my thoughts on this obby!
Lobby
The lobby looks really good!
The start to the obby looks well made and looks like a lot of effort was put into it.
I like how there’s 2 different islands so it isn’t just thrown into the main lobby area.
I like how much effort was put into the donation boards! I also like how there’s a donation board leaderboard!
UI
I like how the background is transparent so you don’t see the frame as much. I also like how it blends in with the Core Guis like the chat box.
I like how neat the Skip Stage button and the stage counter / stage selecter is.
I like how there’s an FPS counter.
And lastly, the progress bar, I like how neat it looks!
Obby Stages
I like how good the allignment is on stages 1-2.
Stage 3 I like how there’s a short cut and how neat it looks and how much effort was put into it.
For the conveyors, maybe make it so there’s an arrow pointing in the direction it will push you towards, or make an arrow that moves the exact speed the conveyor will push you towards.
Stage 17, I like how smooth it was made, like you smoothened each one. Like this.
Lastly, for the last stage, maybe add a winners area, or a sign that says “You beat the obby! More coming soon…”.
Suggestions
- Add some music to the game, it’s quiet.
Conclusion
Very fun game! I wish there were more stages. The game play was great. The UI was awesome. And there wasn’t any lag.
I would rate this game a 9.5/10.