I’ve been working on this game for the better part of a week. I personally think it’s fine, but I feel like I need more of an outside perspective to improve on it.
Check out my game. I’d appreciate some constructive criticism.
Here are some preview thumbnails since my friend suggested I add some on here:
For what it is and the timeframe that it was made in it is okay. Though I do have a few suggestions.
No offense but I feel the thumbnails need some improvement. They just feel very low quality to me, and I personally would rather see something else there. Whether it’s a drawing, GFX or even just a higher quality screenshot I feel that any of those would be more pleasing to look at than what is there now.
The roof is WAY too high and the whole building feels just too large, almost in a cartoony or comedic way. I recommend bringing the roof down and overall making the building a little smaller in area.
Improve the outside of the dinner. The outside of the building and the forest around it, though not super important just feels lazily done and like you just copied and pasted the same tree model a bunch and called it a day. I recommend adding different kinds of trees with different sizes as well. I personally feel it would look better and bring a more realistic feel to the game in general.
Other than those three things I have no more suggestions and your dinner seems to be going in the right direction. Make sure to keep up the great work and never stop trying!
Was this made for the R6 player model… My R15 frame walks like it’s stiff. The way you sit looks odd. Again, may be something for the R6 player model. The roof being high is good for games, so I think that is fine. Seen a few floaters and there is this odd chunkiness to some objects on the edges. Like it just will not let my rig render it any better. Maybe too much blur going on. Also seems like it’s raining a bit hard. None of this is a dealbreaker… Just a few touch ups. I like the room and all the stuff in it and the concept. You did a good job.
I’m pretty hard core when it comes to that. Just walk around and really look at things. Have somthing you can wright down where that problem is, build up a list and go fix them. I swear that takes longer than creating a place itself. Also I did say little things. I’m just super picky about that kind of stuff on myself. I’m sure most wouldn’t even notice this stuff.
