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Hi! Recently had a commission and wanted to hear your thoughts on it. Worked pretty long on this so I hope you like it.
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Here are some other versions:


Portfolio if you want to hire me.

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Also forgot to watermark the last two GFX, so plz dont steal thanks.

Nope, stealing in 3, 2, 1, stolen, jk. I do think that merely and the rocket has a odd position together cuz it seems as if merely is the one getting hit.

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NOOOO DONT STEALL!!! Anyway, I think that its pretty evident that the bacon hair is charging at Merely, I think the rocket is aligned with the rocket launcher, if not please tell me!

I meant the rocket from the launcher looks as if it were to hit merely in the shoulder. It’s cuz the effects for the first one blends into the yellow tower

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Yeah I can see now, the one who commissioned asked for me to do the matrix bullet scene and it was a bit hard implementing it with the other characters, but will fix that.

Yeah I can see that, maybe make the bullet closer?

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That could help, thanks for helping me!

That’s a good GFX, not going to lie, it’s honestly looking good, however since it is based on Doomspire Brickbattles, maybe make the bridges more brick-looking even with that dirty texture to make it more relevant, as it is a brickbattle game.

Overall, it’s great! However, maybe fix some small minor details to it, it’s looking very good honestly.

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