Feedback on first Blender GFX

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#1

This was my first time using Blender to make GFX and I was wondering what you all thought about it!

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Thanks!

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#2

Dont mind the super low res US flag on my shirt btw lol

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#3

My eyes arenā€™t paying any attention to the low-quality flag on your shirt. My eyes are looking at this beauty of a GFX that Iā€™ve never seen before! It looks amazing, you could make very good thumbnails with this talent of yours. :slight_smile:

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#4

not great posing, the arm on the right of the iamge is contorted, the lightings donā€™t match, face is low quality, necklace clips through, the character design isnā€™t great, and yeah.

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#5

This is actually really good for your first time! I notice the face and your shirt are pixelated and the hair is clipping through the hat. Otherwise this is great!

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#6

You realize they said this was their FIRST GFX?.. Itā€™s not gonna be perfect dudeā€¦

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#7

hm is the gfx for a game or is it just for practice??

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#8

It was just for practice. Its my own avatar

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#9

Maybe you could make the background a bit darker than your avatar to add some depth, or add some sort of thin outline or shadow. Iā€™m not a genius in GFX, but I have done my fair share of photo sharing, I believe this could be possible. Otherwise it looks good.

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#10

oh ok then its pretty good for practice

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#11

does it matter? he asked for feedback, and i gave feedback?

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#12

He didnā€™t put it down in anyway, he just gave legit feedback that will help them know what to improve.

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#13

Whatā€™s wrong with the posing? Also for the character design thatā€™s not the GFXā€™s problem as heā€™s just making his own avatar.

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#14

it is HIS problem. he needs better character design.

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stiff gead. kind of weird arms. yeah.

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#15

He doesnā€™t need better character design? This is his preference and heā€™s just making a GFX of his avatar so the problem is not in the render

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#16

I think for a first time this is amazing, but for a gfx in general it is a bit bland because there is no real lighting did you use Belford built in lighting or a HDRI. I believe that they add a better quality to the gfx because of the more diversity in the lighting.

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#17

In the full image my avatar is waving, just cropped it out poorly

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#18

No I think they mean where your arm is connected to your body

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#19

I used an HDRI, but I didnā€™t use it really well.

#20

But I think it is amazing for a first gfx. Keep up the good work, and lmk when you are open for commissionā€¦

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