Feedback on first Blender GFX

This was my first time using Blender to make GFX and I was wondering what you all thought about it!

Thanks!

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Dont mind the super low res US flag on my shirt btw lol

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My eyes aren’t paying any attention to the low-quality flag on your shirt. My eyes are looking at this beauty of a GFX that I’ve never seen before! It looks amazing, you could make very good thumbnails with this talent of yours. :slight_smile:

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not great posing, the arm on the right of the iamge is contorted, the lightings don’t match, face is low quality, necklace clips through, the character design isn’t great, and yeah.

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This is actually really good for your first time! I notice the face and your shirt are pixelated and the hair is clipping through the hat. Otherwise this is great!

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You realize they said this was their FIRST GFX?.. It’s not gonna be perfect dude…

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hm is the gfx for a game or is it just for practice??

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It was just for practice. Its my own avatar

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Maybe you could make the background a bit darker than your avatar to add some depth, or add some sort of thin outline or shadow. I’m not a genius in GFX, but I have done my fair share of photo sharing, I believe this could be possible. Otherwise it looks good.

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oh ok then its pretty good for practice

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does it matter? he asked for feedback, and i gave feedback?

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He didn’t put it down in anyway, he just gave legit feedback that will help them know what to improve.

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What’s wrong with the posing? Also for the character design that’s not the GFX’s problem as he’s just making his own avatar.

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it is HIS problem. he needs better character design.

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stiff gead. kind of weird arms. yeah.

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He doesn’t need better character design? This is his preference and he’s just making a GFX of his avatar so the problem is not in the render

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I think for a first time this is amazing, but for a gfx in general it is a bit bland because there is no real lighting did you use Belford built in lighting or a HDRI. I believe that they add a better quality to the gfx because of the more diversity in the lighting.

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In the full image my avatar is waving, just cropped it out poorly

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No I think they mean where your arm is connected to your body

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I used an HDRI, but I didn’t use it really well.

But I think it is amazing for a first gfx. Keep up the good work, and lmk when you are open for commission…

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