Hello everyone! I am fairly new to building and was just looking for improvements to building and feedback! 
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That’s really good for your first build, nice job!
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That’s very good for a first build! Like really good. All I can say is maybe make the windows a little more transparent, and make an indoor area. Also, make some outdoor design. Since it looks like a beach or desert, maybe make some water in the distance and shells, or if its a desert, make cacti. Good luck!
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That’s really well built for your first build. I recommend adding some tumble weed, cactus’s, and sand dunes for some detail.
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Wow! Already using custom textures!? I’m impressed.
One of the most important things when using custom textures is making all the textures fit together. Here some things look nice, but things like the door, which looks brand new, stick out like a sore thumb.
The build itself looks quite nice. It’s giving me some Blaine County vibes from Gta5. Only thing i would definitely change is the roof, which at the moment looks quite flat and synthetic. Try extruding the roof slightly.
Other than that, looking pretty good. Keep doing what you’re doing, and you’ll be a professional in no time with this talent you have! 
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Haha thank you so much! That was one thing I had trouble doing was fixing the textures. It really kinda looked out of place but wasn’t exactly sure how to make it link up. I will keep working at it!
it actually looks nice! I don’t like the window’s texture though. The roof could be improved with more details maybe. Else, looks nice ngl
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While it does look good I would recommend adding a different texture to the glass maybe a natural material or you could possibly find a new glass texture to match the building your trying to achieve on the building itself at the moment it’s decent for a first attempt at creating something I’ll give you that.
Try adding a chimney or something to give the roof so it doesn’t feature a plain look or design in the walls, place some wall lights at the moment the build could use a few objects on the roof area like some boxes objects on the floor area something to give the build more life you could try making the door match with the building a wood door kind of looks on a off side from my point of view.
Definitely choose a different glass texture, add more objects on the floor do you mind explaining what you’ve have made? At the moment it looks good at the start love the use of textures but it could use those small improvements.
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Oh the building is just a work in progress gun store. Not much, like to be used in a game, just kind of a practice run of something I would use in a game. And I agree with everything you’ve said, the build could definitely use some improvements.
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I can’t believe this is your first build. It looks very neat. I see the use of decals and separate textures which is a great thing, but I would rather recommend using a material as this texture doesn’t really connect with the rest of the materials on this building. Overall I think that this is amazing for your first time and I would like to wish good luck to you in the future!
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Looks very good for a first build, keep the good work up!
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wow keep it up man you will become a pro builder with robux
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For this to be your first build on the ROBLOX platform, I can say myself that this is a fantastic result for someone’s first build.
I love the fact that you brung out the oldness of the building with textures, getting involved with textures early on in your building prospect of ROBLOX is fantastic. I want to see more of your creations on the DevForum to see how you can progress not only as a builder but a future developer!
Best of Luck,
stickza
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I’d recess the actual glass in the window frames, slightly back
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That is really good for your first build. Good job!
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You did an amazing job using custom textures, it absolutely fits the build. Really good job for a first build, keep on building and improving even more!
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This is your… First Build? It’s really good for a First Build! I doubt I was this good even when I started building. Good Job!
Hello there,
It’s really worked out very well for a beginner as far as I’m concerned!
It doesn’t look too big either! Did you build on an NPC or something?
Good luck building it!
Greetings,
Sys. (Aka. Tim)
Hi there! It really looks amazing for the first build. I think you should change windows material and make it more light. Good job though!
Dang, this is your first build. This is really impressive as a first build compare to mine.