Feedback on first build

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#1

Hello!

I just picked up building, specifically yesterday. (10/7/2020) I specialize in graphics, and clothing, however I felt to step out of my comfort zone. Here is the homestore that I built, that I am looking for feedback on. If you’d like a closer look, or want to see more detail, you are free to visit the homestore here.

The Build:

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I appreciate you taking the time to read through this. Please keep in mind I am looking for constructive criticism, and this is my first build.

Along with that, I am new to the DevForum, so let me know if I did/showcased anything I’m not supposed to.

Thank you!

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#2

Looks good for your first building, the clothing store is cool, the lighting is good, in general I rate up to 10 points, I wish you good luck in the future

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#3

Thank you so much! This means a lot.

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#4

If you like working together in a studio or something like that, then write me a private message with the get :wink:

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#5

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we found a bug here with the keys, we threw out the keys and after the reset new ones appeared

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#6

Thanks for bringing this up! I’ll be sure to patch this.

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#7

My friend and I liked this game in which you can get undressed, let’s get lost with him now

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here’s another mistake in the word, it sounds right like “build”

or we just didn’t understand

#9

This looks very good! (way better than my first build). You could make the outside pathways concrete and you should put some dirt here. The blur is a little bit too much
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#10

…THAT’S YOUR FIRST BUILD!?

It’s 1000x better than my first build!

My only problems with it is how close the aisles are together, and the lack of decoration.

:+1:

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#11

Can you not being down with those words free models? She obvs spent a lot of time ! so you do not want to find out free models

Thanks, Fusion

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#12

Thanks for the feedback! I’m adding more detail to it now. Appreciate it!

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#13

This is your first build??? Wow! This is amazing! One thing tho, it could be my computer, but if not, I think the Blur is a little too much. :grinning:

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#14

Note taken, and thanks! Appreciate it.

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#15

looks good for your first creation, I like the atmosphere itself. great work!

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#16

Appreciate it! Means a lot to hear.

#17

Looks good, I like the contrasting, lighting and the designs and depth you made. Keep working.

#18

uhh you sure thats a mistake buddy lol

#19

do try to avoid using open sourced meshes, (free models or anything found in the toolbox that isnt yours) because they don’t really fit in with the rest of the build, and try building without f3x it will make your better over time than using f3x.

#20

i didn’t use free models nor build with f3x, not sure what you mean