Feedback on first drifting animation + camera movements

Hello, I made an attempt at a drifting scene and I wanna improve on them.I was thinking in the future I
could create some cool car chase scenes! Could you guys give me some feedback on what stuff I could add to make it look better? Or perhabs point out some mistakes that went over my head?
https://streamable.com/wjs51h

Many thanks!

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Too many camera movements, I can’t really focus on the car. The drift animation is good, second one is best.

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I love the camera sequence, and the drifting is smooth as all hell.

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For the first shot i was going for a handheld camera, but I agree that maybe it was a bit too shaky. Also, both of the drifting animations are the same, just a different camera angle :sweat_smile: Thank you for the feedback!

That drift scene was awesome! I can’t wait to see the full version you make out of that. :grinning:

I do have a suggestion though, you should try adding exhaust fumes coming from the car to make it a bit more realistic. That might help make the scene a bit more natural.

Otherwise, great job. You deserve a round of applause for that scene! :grin: :clap:

Edit: Here is a reference photo of what I mean so you can have a better idea in-mind of what I meant by adding the exhaust fumes during the drift scene.

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Pretty amazing, i would recommend adding smoke to the wheels

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Thank you! I will add some particles to the scene :slightly_smiling_face:

also you should add wheel lines trailing behind. like tire lines

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