Feedback on first GFX I made

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Hello!

I’m currently remaking a JJBA game I made in 2021
So I decided to try to make a GFX for the first time for the game

It’s the first time I try to make a GFX so obviously it’s not any good
But I also don’t have a clear picture of what a good GFX should be

I also never used Blender to render anything or something like that, only for models, so it’s a completly new area for me

So I want your feedback about it (even if you’re not into GFX) and know what should I do better!

Here’s the GFX, on the game page so it feels more… “natural”, I guess?

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The scene was also made entirely using Blender, not sure if that’s a good idea as building is a bit faster on Roblox, but like I said, it’s just my first day trying to do a GFX, so I don’t know

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Thanks for reading!

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I like that, though the whole glare, purple thing, I dont like that, its just very hard to see anything. but either than that, I like the build, the poses. you should add ome lighting for that “enviormental” feel but either than those too, I like it

nice job :+1:

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Thanks!
I also thought it was hard to see…
But I wasn’t able to get a solution to make it feel darker and still be easier to see…

Also it’s based on this gif (but with a different character)
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Considering it was your first GFX, it looks vrey great compared to mine, sitll got lot to work on but I personally love it!

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Thanks!

I’m preparing for my next one, hope it gets a bit better…

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If you ever need tips, ask. I’ve done GFXs for like a year until my PC woudln’t render in cycle, I’m getting this week a 5060 and I’ll start once again

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