[FeedBack] on First Low-Poly Full build

Hello people, I post this to get some feedback on my first Low-Poly build!
(Tell me if things should be added or not or it should just stay like this)

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thats cool
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Very creative, I like the style and design of the build!

By the way, that’s a good way to start of making Low-Poly building, good work! :+1:

Your door is kinda big compared to the proportions of the rest of the build

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Looks very nice! However, as LandofLee1620 just mentioned, the door does seem quite disproportional in comparison to the rest of the building. In addition to this, the window at the top of the door doesn’t appear to be fully centered.

Besides that, I enjoy the build :slight_smile: Gives me vibes of a game I used to play long ago, but I can’t quite remember the name of it.

Oh alr thank you! and thank you for the feed back! (30 charrrrrrrrrrrrrrrsssssssss)

I really like it! Good job! (30 chars)

the tree should be remade. and the house have more detail around the walls,
and also make it symmetric , that window almost going out of the wall hurts my eyes lol

Your building isn’t bad considering this is your first one. However, I have a few suggestions:

While the building looks nice I would center the top part as it seems to be out of place. Decrease the door width, it is a little too big the frames on the windows seems to blend in with the building try going for a more vibrant color maybe white, or something that matches with the build. The window frames are all the same thickness from outer frame to inner frame, definitely size your building a bit smaller at the moment it seems to be placed with just a bunch of windows with awnings on it I don’t think that’s really needed.

I’ll try adding more shapes to the leaves on the trees consider sizing, rotating, them different angles so they don’t look the same.

Alr mk thanks.

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Looks pretty neat, but maybe you shouldn’t use the same windows, maybe have some off and some on in a way.

For your first build this isn’t half bad. It’s nothing spectacular but keep up the grind and you’ll be a great low-poly builder. This is a great start!

It looks pretty good. But like @LandofLee1620 said I think the door is kinda big and you should maybe add a little more to each side to make it pop out, t make it uniqe. But it dose look great for your first low poly build. keep up the good work. :grinning:

Thanks!

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Symmetry is the main issue at a glance but upon taking a closer look, I recommend you make the window frames black instead of red. Other than that, it looks great for a first build. Good luck on your future builds!

Door is hugeee. Windows are not aligned and the tree is simple blender level. otherwise its good

Not bad, however, I think the door should not go that high into the roof, and the window looks weird on the door because of its texture.

Wow! I’m totally impressed at your work! btw not bad! Keep it up! :+1:

I just noticed it when I see your reply XD! tbh the door is kinda tall that is reaches the 2nd floor

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Yeah it does I just noticed that(A long time ago) And I didn’t know what I could do on colors for windows so I did another shade of red. I’m going to fix those problems on the build soon after I’m done making some more things. I’m also going to fix that tall as door.