Feedback on First Person Animation

So this is my first animation using blender and I know it’s very bad, but I’d like some pointers on how it can be improved or just general animating on blender tips.

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I don’t understand what is the gray thing.

Its kind of bland, give it some motion, make right arm more “Alive” maybe and etc., there is quite stuff to be improved.

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not bad, would give this a 6/10.

the part where he flips the grey part in his hand looks unnatural. and add some more camera shake to it.

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it’s a walkman on the right and a cassette tape on the left

Simple and decent for your first time. I like it, I don’t know why so many people are rating this horribly without actually seeing what this guy is going for. 8/10 for me

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Oh ok. It looks good so! But the arms are too big compared to the cassette tape.

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Without the unrealistic spin, I think it would look great solid 8/10. (better than anything I can animate lol)

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Me personally, I like the spin as it gives a little life into the animation even with it amateurishly animated. If the animation was used in a game that wasn’t taking itself seriously than I think it would be fine, but for other use cases, I agree with removing it.

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I like it. I feel old because I recognized the Walkman right away,.

Leif_aw

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