I would like some feedback on my first piece of music! It’s pretty rough and I almost did not finish it but I figured it’s better to get that first one out there.
Creating this was mostly a learning experience but I would like to know what you would add to improve upon it!
When I was making it I think I was listening to it so much that the build up didn’t seem as long as it was, so I definitely see that problem. The middle part with just the drums was more of an experiment to see if that could keep the piece exciting/tense but I guess it just fell off more than anything. Thanks for the feedback!
I love it sounds great has that final stand/scary type sound to it. 
Keep making more like these.
I love this, its perfect for a boss battle or danger zone in an RPG. Its not annoying or in your face, but it does set the mood very well.