Feedback on Flashlight (WIP) [UPDATED]

Hey there!

So i made a flashlight and i thought it would be nice if i got some opinions on it. Please note that this is still a WIP. The actual light block isn’t there yet because i want to show you the build without some bright neon brick blinding you.

This flashlight is made for a horror game.

Here’s what it looks like (lit up):

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Here’s the light it actually makes:

Everything is original. I used blender to make the body, and the rest is studio parts with textures. The light is also just a simple SpotLight.

Any opinions are appreciated!

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In my opinion. The flashlight base design doesn’t look good with that much gap

What i basically mean

Gap

My suggestion is to make the grip a bit smoother. Just put two small gap in each edge like this,
Flashlight model
Anyway i like the texture and the light actually.

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Thanks for the feedback. (On the old flashlight)

Yes now that i look at it, it does look very odd, gappy (if that’s even a word xd) and just plain overall. Thanks for opening my eyes. No wonder i couldn’t find a reference image close to my design.

I think i’ll actually re-design the flashlight (the bumps) entirely, but ill keep in mind to reduce as much space as possible as said in your reply.

Much appreciated.

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