Hello, a while ago I made a topic about my game that I am about to release, Based on fnaf And in this new topic I wanted to know your opinions on this teaser Trailer, The game will be released this year in mid-August, The day is not confirmed, But If you have questions, leave them in the comments, thank you.
PT.1: Feedback on Fnaf game
Very interesting. The main thing I would suggest is working on the diction. If English isn’t your first language (which is completely fair, I know we have many international devs) you could always try reaching out to someone in order to get the text right. Like fixing strange wording, spelling mistakes, and grammar. That kind of thing greatly contributes to how your game is perceived.
Keep up the good work!