Hi there everyone. I was working a piece of graphics last night but then windows update came around and my art went I redid the entire thing today a couple hours ago and just finished the final render and editing it. Can you guys suggest me things which I should improve on? On my last feedback, the shadow’s on the chracther were kinda bad so I took time trying to improve from the help of my friend @Wilylol and I’ve got a new piece.
##After the blood and tears of my pc, I hereby present you…
Looks good so far. I think it’s odd that the background kind of features a grass appearance on warmer mornings i would assume the background would be some sort of water to cast reflection to look more realistic in a kind of way the background is a little confusing since I’m having a hard time if this is grass with small hills or mountains. It may be a good idea to spice up your background up a bit.
Maybe a tree with vegetation on the ground or a apple tree to improve the background, however that may be something your not focusing on at the moment the character posing and camera view is good.
It looks like the legs are going through the chair instead of the character sitting on top of it. I would suggest possibly editing the sitting pose. Otherwise great work!
Great art, I love the lighting and shadows, I can see you put effort and time into making. I suggest adding in art a small tree/plant on the fence and a bamboo chair, the one that the character is sitting on. I love your art. Keep up the good work!!
I redid the entire thing today a couple hours ago and just finished the final render and editing it. Can you guys suggest me things which I should improve on? On my last feedback, the shadow’s on the chracther were kinda bad so I took time trying to improve from the help of my friend @Wilylol and I’ve got a new piece.
