I would like some feedback on what I should change!
The startup sequence seems a bit unfinished, so you should probably add some alarms around that control room and definitely some sound effects.
Could do with some more of everything, really. What I mean is that you should add some more sound effects (alarms, machine clanks) and visual effects (lights, machine parts). I also think it lacks suspense.
I added some stuff
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