Feedback on futuristic gun I made for a game?

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#1

Hello, its me again!

Here is a futuristic low poly pistol I made for a game.
that is been currently been working on.

go easy on me its my first gun

gun

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I have made 20 guns so far and they all have been ranging from weak to strongest
not allowed to show the others though!

Yes this is not a mesh.
Yes I got a job 3 days into the forum

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#2

It looks pretty good, although the color of the gun looks kinda dull.

#3

I tried adding some color schemes, it looks bad on it.

any suggestions for a colorscheme?
We had to use shadowmap since future isn’t release yet…

#4

it looks great! although the shape of the weapon looks kinda weird.

#5

what parts of it do I change?

I need to get it perfect.

#6

That looks very nice, it reminds me of a luger :thinking:

#7

The shape looks futuristic, could use some textures though. Well done!

#8

Wow! This is pretty good for a first model.

#9

I honestly love it!
30 characters

#10

Maybe a grey and neon green? Just try stay away from two light colors, unless thats the theme ur goin for

#11

It is lol

and I am making some guns based on Blue Black and Neon Light Green

#12

Looks great! Reminds me of some kind of alien gun.

pew pew

#13

id say you should change the barrel of the gun. it just looks weird and does not really fit with the rest of the gun.

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#14

안녕!! :wave:
Its a good jumping-off point, but I feel that the gun can be improved greatly in multiple areas.

A basic design principle that I personally adhere to whenever I do gun building is that a weapon should always make sense from the user’s perspective.
With respect to that, I’ll suggest a few quick changes to the design of the pistol:

  1. The pistol grip shouldn’t be swept forward, but rather, swept backwards: this is just a matter of ergonomics. (I am assuming that humanoid individuals are going to be wielding the pistol)
  2. The trigger guard needs to be greatly enlarged. Realistically, a finger is not going to be able to fit in there to pull the trigger.

Apart from those two immediately glaring issues that I can see with the gun’s design, this is a great first effort! I can see it shaping up to be a classy “space luger” of sorts. Keep it up!

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#15

Looks excellent, but the handle looks uncomfortable to hold. I would put the clip a but farther back and add a grip in front of the clip and make the trigger a concavity so it looks like it would actually be comfortable to hold. Otherwise the top part of the gun looks very futuristic, like phaser from Star Trek. Keep up the good work.

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