Hi guys I need feedback on my new game icon. What can I improve and What are some things I should change. Also please give specific detailed feedback. Thanks for your help!
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Add more background, fix the lighting a bit and create a custom sky.
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The icon and thumbnail look good, but itâs way too empty in the background, and it should be more decorated with things back there. Otherwise, nice job on these!
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for the icon the font looks weird use Gotham SSm
and in the thumbnail the I in âBuildâ also looks weird because the stroke is thick except the sides of the I
the 
doesnât fit in very well in the thumbnail, actually id use the thumbs up the devfourm uses only because its used in roblox twitter and discord and its more familiar.
what you did good is that you used green so its more eye-catching talking about eye-catching make the âBuild A Townâ text in the icon more bigger so its easier for people to notice
Also just like the other people are complaining, backgrounds too like empty and bland. just like the icon, its just a house on a empty baseplate.
Someone might say like âadd like a picture of a random big city in robloxâ, personally wouldnât do that just cause its not authentic and when someone clicks on it, theyâd probably end up leaving because they realize that you cant build a city like shown on the thumbnail. So iâd probably put a picture of your game with a big town built. (assuming you can build big towns in your game)
Aside from that the games is about build a town and youre showing a picture of a house on a green baseplate, im assuming from the title of the icon its about building a town. not a house.
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You need to make it pop, rn the lighting is very bland and doesnât make it very clickable
why is people even doing clickbait icons and adding âURGENTâ to the title for clickbait
the thumbnail is good ⌠the game map is TERRIBLE so yea this makes the thumbnail kinda bad
theres not enough going on in the thumbnail it looks like an empty green baseplate with a road two cars and some trees in the background
same thing for the icon it needs more going on
also im confused it is a car building game or a town building game the thumbnail has cars and the icon has a house and a car you should fix that
the sky looks fine i use that one all the time so you should be fine there