Feedback on game icon

So I made this pretty kinda bad icon. Im not best at doing this kind of stuff so anything you notice wrong let me know

This is my first ever “GFX”

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Not bad,

But I think you should fix the sky. It looks a bit like dark paint smudged everywhere. Have a dark blue sky, and add smoke on top of it, not smudge it in.

I would also suggest adding some fire particles to give a better atmosphere to the icon since there is a fire. I also think you should tone down on the smudging (on the car, the smoke, the fire).

Overall, pretty good for your first GFX! Keep it up! :happy3:

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It’s cool, but doesn’t it looks a bit like a painting?

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There’s a bit too much “swirl” but it looks pretty good nonetheless.

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Not bad for your first gfx. No criticism whatsoever, but the flames, smoke, as well as the water from the hose look like a pastel-ish paint style. Other than that, it looks nice. Keep practicing!

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Fire looks like edited, i would find / make a realistic fire instead to match with the cars and bg

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Add some smoke clouds in sky and also I think the person is using the hose to water a garden. Have some back force on him.

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