Feedback on game Idea, and game name?

I need feedback on my game idea:

So, It’s a first person speedrunner, yadda yadda, but there’s multiple courses, a lobby, and of course gamepasses for revenue. There’ll be maps such as: “The Ice Lands”, “Sandy Contastraphey”, “A World of Fire”, and so on. Each map being different, snow, sand, water, fire, ect. You’ll be able to pick trails (bought with gamepasses), and you’ll be able to level up with a leveling system. Each time you win a round, you get awarded with so and so amount of XP.

The name:
BloxSwift.

Now, I need your feedback.

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Change the name to SwiftBlox instead? Rolls on the tongue easier.

Regarding the game’s idea:
Personally, I don’t see how it is different from speedrun 4. It is unappealing if you’re just trying to ‘improve’ a bit on graphics but not changing the overall game loop. No one will jump over to your game since they’ve a commitment to speedrun 4. So unless you can provide with mechanics that can make things more interesting and a more thought-out game loop, this game is not going to work.

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I don’t want to ruin your game idea/development,but it sounds simple and the first game that comes to mind is Speed Run.You need to think way ahead.Games which make it to the front page nowadays actually have a huge idea in one box.

But you seem determined,so i hope you find a better idea and make a very popular game in the future.So good luck :smiley:

Agreeing with the above comments. You’ll need to somehow beat the development team of speedrun in their own game unless you innovate more.

Well, perhaps - I should’ve expressed the Idea more, It’s first person unlike Speedrun. There’s turning objects, up and down, jump pads, ice to slide on, and there’ll be wall running, ect.

But, there may not be a lobby. It’s just planned, but there’ll be auto-generating maps.