Feedback on Game Intro/Menu

Hellooo there, anyways, I would like some criticism, opinions, and thoughts on my Game Intro/Menu!

https://www.roblox.com/games/2747716168/Speed-Run-Multiverse

Also, if there are any problems, just F9 and take a picture to show me.

EDIT:
https://www.roblox.com/games/3100505184/Test-Intro-Site

Created a similar intro to it but with some minor improvements, of course i’m using a temporary background and sidebar, (will probs change it to the one “Speed Run Multiverse” has…) so hopefully this seems a bit better?

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Overall the into is really good however it’s dragged out too long. It took anywhere between 10 - 15 seconds for me to receive the “play” button and that was quite annoying.

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Should I add a skip button to fix that?

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Yeah possibly but you still want players to know your brand. Clockwork Studios have a loading screen that shows their icon and name for 5 seconds then gets straight into the game.

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Thanks, ill be sure to keep that in mind to remember.

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To be honest, the intro is nauseating and made me feel like I was about to vomit from motion sickness. Would definitely change that bit lol.

Everything else is well-designed.

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Yeah like @Somnar said the shaking screen was a bit too ’ shaky ’ maybe you could fix this with either:

  • Less shaking.

  • Instead of shaking looking at the desert it could slowly fade through the different levels of the game.

  • Maybe different shots of the map with little movement that just play in a loop.

The UI is perfectly good though!

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Should I just take screen-shots of the levels and put them as the “background” and fade through like that?
Or should I just do a cut-scene that loops through the levels?

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Well, it might not look as good with a still image so if you were to do screenshots I’d make them slightly move using tween but you could also make it slightly move doing cut scenes. It’s up to you but I do suggest making it so it moves slightly.Do you understand what I mean?

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Added a new intro testing site, try it out to see how you like it :stuck_out_tongue:

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Fantastic, I really like how to mouse effects the camera position, All that It needs now in my opinion is some different backgrounds for it to rotate through. Good work.:+1:

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Completely revamped a few bits of the intro, see how you like it right now, hopefully its better. (Had to remove mouse effect thing since it was a hassle to make it work with cutscene but ye)

Edit: Play the Test Intro Site one…

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It’s great, I don’t think there’s much to improve on in this. Good job :+1:

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Thanks for helpin :stuck_out_tongue:

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