Feedback on Game Over screen

Hello! So I just did one of game over screens that I wanted to do. Here it is (music isn’t mine):

My goal is to make multiple game over screens variations that will play randomly. Some of them to play have some requirements, for example you need be killed by your friend, die 5 times to same person and etc.
Any feedback appreciated!

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What is the text behind the character?

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Looks amazing. Clean animation, plus i like how the text moves. 10/10.

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“Fallen Down”
Going to make it pop out when you dying because of fall damage

Pretty clean. The only problem is the avatar hiding the text, making it hard to read.

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Looks cool, you should make it fade in and out at the beginning and end instead of it just appearing.

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I like ZO’s death page a lot, try it

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way too unclear for the background text and way too cool to be the game over screen

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I think it looks like an interesting screen, but the character’s pose seems too energized to fit with a game over screen. Maybe it would improve the screen if you made the character sit down, which would also let players see the text.

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It’s very clean and nice. But will we see our own character on the game over screen (I know this is a dumb question)?

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Yes, im trying to make it.
random text

Things like
Squished by falling anvil
Swam in lava etc
“Tripped over leaves”

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