Hi everyone!
We’ve recently released our newest Roblox game, Maldives Resorts, where players must work together as a team to run a tropical resort.
I worked on a trailer for it below and would love to hear your feedback and any improvements that I can make? Thank you for your time!
this is cool but the sound effect ruin the trailer (0:14). Try to delete this sound effect. Overall is very good, maybe try to change the music or delete the sound effect. and Thats it. I really like it
Well, I think your trailer is great. Good job 
Oh this is actually part of the background music (which wasn’t created by me) so it doesn’t let me remove it - thank you for your feedback! 
Nice trailer, personally to make it better I think the dialogue/text describing the game can be designed to look a little more enticing.
i think your trailer is really good 
Nice trailer, and really cool game idea! Though the video quality could be better. I would choose a different font and size for the text, or just keep it as a video (for better video quality, try using a different video recorder)
Any suggestions as to how I can do that? Thank you for the feedback!
In addition to the posts about the sound effect, I think you should change the text font & outline. It’s very generic and doesn’t really fit the theme of the game. Try something a little more cartoony or ‘louder’/bolder, with a thinner outline, something like Roblox’s ‘Bangers’, ‘LuckiestGuy’, or ‘Cartoon’ font.
Great trailer overall!
I liked the sound effect and the music. That was a very good trailer.