Feedback on GFX created through Blender

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#1

Hello there, my name is Dataspec, also known as Sy.

I have been building on Roblox for a couple years now but only recently got into Blender.
Everything seen in the GFX below was all built and rendered by me (apart from the Roblox character of course).

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Since this is my first time creating a GFX using a 3D environment I’d like to hear some feedback! :grin:

EDIT: I denoised the GFX, thanks for the advice!

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#2

The pose of the robber looks strange. But apart from that, it looks great!

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#3

You should learn more about denoising, at the moment there is a lot of it in your GFX.

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#4

Thanks for your advice, it is much appreciated. I will check it out and rerender the GFX. (I’ll add it onto the post aswell).

EDIT: I only had to enable Optix denoising in Blender itself, looks very clean now. Thanks again, I’ll replace the current GFX with the denoised version.

#5

I like this GFX a lot.

If it’s for a game, I think players would see what the concept of the game would be.

Things I don’t like
I don’t like how the gold that the robber is carrying is really dark.

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It looks like the gold is dripping which is really weird, or it might be pebbles.

Things I like

I really like the detail on this.

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The detail on this is cool, it shows the code to the safe. (If this GFX was for a game this could be a secret.)

Keep up the good work! :wink:

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#6

Thanks for your opinion! I agree with the bars the robber holding being rather dark, I tried to fix it but couldn’t do it properly, next time I’ll try fixing it with some lighting.

Also, the “pebbles” are golden coins which he’s dropped in a hurry to get away due to the alarm going off. I thought they’d make for a cool extra detail although I understand that they can be confusing lol.

I’ll make sure to keep improving!!

#7

I like this GFX much.

There is a good attention to detail, but the lighting for the bars and coins could be a little lighter.

Aside from that, it’s great! :+1:

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#8

I think this is a really good GFX! My advice is to maybe add a bit of shine on the coins and make them brighter! Apart from that, I like everything else! :smile:

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#9

It’s definitely not bad for a first time try using a 3D generated background. The coins and the bars could be slightly lighted up and the pose changed up a little.

-Summary

  • Coins and the bars can be lighted up slightly.
  • Pose can be changed up a little.
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#10

It’s really nice, altough there could be some more lighting.

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